ESP and PBLL - EDITING By Rahma Maulida
ESP EDITING By Rahma Maulida
Writer : Muhammad Yudhistira Maypradana Indikaputra
Editor : Rahma Maulida
List of activities in ESP for Photography Business
1. Short Article about Photography
2. 5W1H Questions
3. Verbal and Nominal Sentences
4. Tenses and It’s Pattern
5. Active and Passive Construction
6. List of Vocabulary
7. Translation into Indonesia
8. Reasons Why Writer Uses Tenses
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1. Short Article about Photography
WHAT IS LONG EXPOSURE PHOTOGRAPHY?
So, what exactly is Long Exposure Photography?
As the name suggests, this is a style of photography that involves using long exposures, or slow shutter speeds. That way, we can blur moving elements like water, cars, or clouds. The exact definition is a bit blurry but the majority of photographers agree that a long exposure begins when the shutter speed is too slow to capture sharp handheld images. That exact shutter speed varies by camera and focal length. It's not just landscape photographers who love this technique; it is also popular among other genres such as architecture, street photography, abstract, and culture. It is more common in certain areas of photography but the technique can be used in many ways.
WHAT IS SHUTTER SPEED?
Long Exposure Photography is a technique that requires a slow shutter speed. To fully understand the basics of this technique, it is therefore important to understand the basic settings of your camera, especially shutter speed.
Shutter speed is the amount of time the camera's shutter is open. This period is measured in seconds or fractions of seconds. A larger denominator, such as 1/1000, is a faster shutter speed than a lower denominator such as 1/10.
Below is an easy and practical exercise to see how shutter speed affects photos:
1. Place the camera on a tripod, table, or other place (another place) where the camera can stand steadily
2. Set the shutter speed to 1/1000 and have someone walk across the frame (or use a delayed shutter and do it yourself)
3. Adjust the shutter speed to 1/500 and repeat
4. Repeat again but this time using a slower shutter speed like 1/200, 1/20, 1/5 and end with 1 second
There's not much difference between the first few pictures (unless the person is running through the room). However, the image starts to look different after the shutter speed reaches 1/5 second.
At 1 second, the person walking across the room runs away, some will say it looks like a ghost!
IMPORTANT EQUIPMENT FOR LONG EXPOSURE PHOTOGRAPHY
1 Camera with manual function
It shouldn't be necessary to say that a camera is needed to shoot but I'll mention it.
Long Exposure Photography techniques can be achieved using most digital cameras (or even the latest smartphones). The main requirement is that it has the possibility to manually adjust the camera settings, such as ISO, aperture and shutter speed.
2 Sturdy tripod
Tripods are essential for Long Exposure Photography. I repeat. A tripod is essential.
Some might get creative and use a rock or other object to place the camera, but we both know that's a less flexible and robust solution. Keep in mind that this technique requires using a slow shutter speed, often stretching to seconds, or even minutes. In such situations, it is impossible to capture sharp images handheld.
3 Remote shutter release
Remote shutter release comes in handy when you are using Bulb Mode. This is not essential when shooting with exposure times under 30 seconds, but I recommend always using the camera's remote shutter release or delayed shutter function. This is an important step in reducing unwanted camera vibration.
4 Neutral Density Filter
The final essential tool for Long Exposure Photography is the Neutral Density filter. Those familiar with the technique might say it's possible to achieve long exposures without a filter as well. That's one hundred percent true, in some situations.
Neutral Density filters are more commonly referred to as ND filters. This is a dark filter that is attached to the lens to reduce the amount of light reaching the shutter. The darker the filter, the slower the shutter speed needed to capture a well-lit image.
A. 5W1H Questions
Instruction: Referring to the Company Profile You have, please build each two examples of your sentences Question and Answer based on 5W1H (Who, What, Where, Why, When, How).
CLUES FOR BUILDING SENTENCES | ||
WH | Meaning | Example |
Who | Person | Who is your favorite idol in Photography Business? |
What | Things, Ideas, Information, Action | What are you bringing in bag? (Thing) What are you thinking about Photography Business? (Idea) What kind of Photography Book do you wish to buy? (Info) What are you doing with Photography Business? (Action) |
Where | Place | Where is my book entitled Guide to Photo Book? |
Why | Reason | Why did you bring that photo book? |
When | Time | When is his son’s birthday? |
Which | Choice | Which design style of academic book do you like more? |
Whose | Possession | Whose book on the table? |
How | Manner | How did you convince customer about photography business? How do you choose a book cover? How do you make an attractive book cover? |
How many | Quantity | How many photography books does she have? |
How much | Quantity | How many photo book do you need? |
How often | Frequency | How often do you read books? |
How far | Distance | How far is it from your house to the campus? |
How old | Age | How old are you? How long Duration How long will the test be? |
SENTENCE BUILDING
No | WH | Sentence Building (Question and Answer) |
1 | Who | Who can take long exposure photography? |
Answer | Anyone can take pictures with this technique, but the most important part | |
2 | Who | Who’s |
Answer | Michael billy | |
3 | What | What is |
Answer | That’s a photographic technique that combines a still object with a moving object plus using a slow shutter speed to get the effect of movement (or traces) of moving object. involves using a long-duration shutter speed to sharply capture the stationary elements of images while | |
4 | What | what equipment is needed |
Answer | Camera, Tripod, and ND filter | |
5 | Where | Where you can take long exposure |
Answer | we can take long exposure photos anywhere, but we must pay attention to the surroundings so that our photos can be maximized, for example, outdoors and we take photos of objects that are still and at least | |
6 | Where |
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Answer | in a comfortable place, not in a place that is easy to shake | |
7 | Why | Why use long exposure? |
Answer | because With this technique you can learn the | |
8 | Why | Why I write this task using this theme? |
Answer | Because | |
9 | When | When we take long exposure |
Answer | The right time to use the Long Exposure Technique is when there is less light, such as when you want to take the Golden Hours moment after | |
10 | When | When |
Answer | when you get a good position and also the right object. | |
11 | How | How |
Answer | -Know the weather -Know and learn the location -Use tripod -Adjust the composition and lock the focus -Setting Exposure -Install a neutral density (ND) filter on your lens -Used bulb mode -Take in RAW mode - | |
12 | How | How to set mode on |
Answer | set auto white balance, |
B. Verbal and Nominal Sentences
Clues: Verbal sentences (V) are those, which start with a verb. Non-verbal sentences start with a noun or pronoun, or with derivative nouns. Verbal sentences consist of a verb + subject + object or adverbial phrase. The subject and object can be either nouns or pronouns. Nominal sentence (N) also known as equational sentence is a linguistic term that refers to a nonverbal sentence (i.e. a sentence without a finite verb). As a nominal sentence does not have a verbal predicate, it may contain a nominal predicate, an adjectival predicate, in Semitic languages also an adverbial predicate or even a prepositional predicate.
No | Sentences | V | N |
01 | You can take pictures with this technique | N | |
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03 | When you get a good position | N | |
04 | We can take long exposure photos anywhere | N | |
05 | In a comfortable place | N | |
06 | understanding long exposure techniques you will be more creative | V | |
07 | want to know and learn more about this technique | N | |
08 | set auto white balance, | V | |
09 | when you want to take the Golden Hours moment after sunset | N | |
10 | Adjust the composition and lock the focus | V |
C. Active and Passive Construction
Clues: Active sentence is a sentence where the subject performs the action of the verb. For example: John kicked the ball. ("John" is the subject. "John" is performing the action of the verb "kick." Therefore, this is an active sentence.) An active sentence is the opposite of a passive sentence. In a passive sentence, the action of the main verb is done to the subject. The passive voice occurs when the person or thing that performs an action is not the grammatical subject of the sentence. Instead, the person or thing that receives the action is placed before the verb. Passive sentences are formed using the verb to be combined with a past participle.
No | Sentences | Active | Passive |
01 | Anyone can take pictures with this technique | Passive | |
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03 | Using a long-duration shutter speed to sharply capture the stationary elements of images | Active | |
04 | captures one element that conventional photography does not: an extended | Passive | |
05 | we can take long exposure photos anywhere | Active | |
06 | we must pay attention to the surroundings so that our photos can be maximized | Active | |
07 | In a comfortable place | Passive | |
08 | Install a neutral density (ND) filter on your lens | Active | |
09 | By understanding long exposure techniques you will be more creative | Active | |
10 | I want to know and learn more about this technique | Active |
D. List of Vocabulary
No | Vocabulary | Pronoun Spelling | Meaning |
01 | take | /tāk/ | Ambil |
02 | technique | /tekˈnēk/ | Teknik,cara |
03 | speed | /spēd/ | Cepat |
04 | attention | /əˈten(t)SH(ə)n/ | Perhatian |
05 | understanding | /ˌəndərˈstandiNG/ | Mengerti |
06 | Light | /līt/ | Cahaya |
07 | time | /tīm/ | Waktu |
08 | learn | /lərn/ | Belajar |
09 | equipment | /əˈkwipmənt/ | Peralatan |
10 | Adjust | /əˈjəst/ | Atur |
E. Tenses and It’s Pattern
Please identify the tenses of ten sentences you take from the article. Learn the matrix clues below.
1. Anyone can take pictures with this technique (Present simple)
2. Long-exposure photography captures one element that conventional photography does not (Present simple)
3. we must pay attention to the surroundings so that our photos can be maximized (past simple)
4. doesn't mean the Long Exposure technique is only used when there is low light. (past simple)
5. The right time to use the Long Exposure Technique is when there is less light. (present simple)
6. when you get a good position and also the right object. (present simple)
7. Install a neutral density (ND) filter on your lens (present simple)
8. set auto white balance, auto focus (autofocus), shutter speed 4 seconds, and ISO 100 (present simple)
9. Take in RAW mode (present simple)
10. Used bulb mode (Past simple)
F. Translation into Indonesia
Please translate the article into Indonesia
F. Please sum-up the article by explaing the reason why author use the tenses.
Apa itu Fotografi Eksposur Panjang?
Jadi, apa sebenarnya Fotografi Long Exposure itu?
Seperti namanya, ini adalah gaya fotografi yang melibatkan penggunaan eksposur panjang, atau kecepatan rana lambat . Dengan begitu, kita bisa memburamkan elemen bergerak seperti air, mobil, atau awan.
Definisi yang tepat agak kabur tetapi mayoritas fotografer setuju bahwa eksposur panjang dimulai ketika kecepatan rana terlalu lambat untuk menangkap gambar genggam yang tajam. Kecepatan rana yang tepat itu bervariasi berdasarkan kamera dan panjang fokus.
Bukan hanya fotografer lanskap yang menyukai teknik ini; itu juga populer di antara genre lain seperti arsitektur, fotografi jalanan, abstrak, dan budaya. Ini lebih umum dalam area fotografi tertentu tetapi tekniknya dapat digunakan dalam banyak cara.
Apa itu kecepatan rana?
Long Exposure Photography adalah teknik yang membutuhkan kecepatan rana lambat. Untuk sepenuhnya memahami dasar-dasar teknik ini, oleh karena itu penting untuk memahami pengaturan dasar kamera Anda , terutama kecepatan rana.
Kecepatan rana adalah jumlah waktu rana kamera terbuka . Periode ini diukur dalam detik atau fraksi detik. Penyebut yang lebih besar, seperti 1/1000, adalah kecepatan rana yang lebih cepat daripada penyebut yang lebih rendah seperti 1/10.
Di bawah ini adalah latihan yang mudah dan praktis untuk melihat bagaimana kecepatan rana memengaruhi foto :
1. Tempatkan kamera di atas tripod, meja, atau tempat lain di mana kamera dapat berdiri dengan stabil
2. Atur kecepatan rana ke 1/1000 dan minta seseorang untuk berjalan melintasi bingkai (atau gunakan rana tertunda dan lakukan sendiri)
3. Sesuaikan kecepatan rana ke 1/500 dan ulangi
4. Ulangi lagi tetapi kali ini menggunakan kecepatan rana yang lebih lambat seperti 1/200, 1/20, 1/5 dan akhiri dengan 1 detik
Tidak ada banyak perbedaan antara beberapa gambar pertama (kecuali orang tersebut berlari melewati ruangan). Namun, gambar mulai terlihat berbeda setelah kecepatan rana mencapai 1/5 detik.
Pada 1 detik, orang yang berjalan di seberang ruangan kabur, beberapa orang akan mengatakan itu terlihat seperti hantu!
Peralatan penting untuk Fotografi Paparan Panjang
#1 Kamera dengan fungsi manual
Seharusnya tidak perlu untuk mengatakan bahwa kamera diperlukan untuk memotret tetapi saya akan menyebutkannya.
Teknik Long Exposure Photography dapat dicapai dengan menggunakan sebagian besar kamera digital (atau bahkan smartphone terbaru). Syarat utamanya adalah ia memiliki kemungkinan untuk menyesuaikan pengaturan kamera secara manual , seperti ISO, aperture, dan kecepatan rana.
#2 Tripod yang kokoh
Tripod sangat penting untuk Fotografi Eksposur Panjang. Saya ulangi. Sebuah tripod sangat penting .
Beberapa mungkin menjadi kreatif dan menggunakan batu atau benda lain untuk meletakkan kamera, tetapi kami berdua tahu bahwa itu adalah solusi yang kurang fleksibel dan kokoh. Ingatlah bahwa teknik ini memerlukan penggunaan kecepatan rana lambat, sering kali meregang menjadi detik, atau bahkan menit. Dalam situasi seperti itu, tidak mungkin menangkap gambar yang tajam dengan genggam.
#3 Pelepas rana jarak jauh
Pelepas rana jarak jauh sangat berguna saat Anda menggunakan Mode Bulb. Ini tidak penting saat memotret dengan waktu pencahayaan di bawah 30 detik, tetapi saya sarankan untuk selalu menggunakan pelepas rana jarak jauh atau fungsi rana tertunda kamera. Ini adalah langkah penting dalam mengurangi getaran kamera yang tidak diinginkan.
#4 Filter Kepadatan Netral
Alat penting terakhir untuk Fotografi Long Exposure adalah filter Neutral Density. Mereka yang akrab dengan teknik ini mungkin mengatakan itu mungkin untuk mencapai eksposur lama tanpa filter juga. Itu seratus persen benar, dalam beberapa situasi.
Filter Neutral Density lebih sering disebut sebagai filter ND. Ini adalah filter gelap yang dipasang ke lensa untuk mengurangi jumlah cahaya yang mencapai rana. Semakin gelap filternya, semakin lambat kecepatan rana diperlukan untuk menangkap gambar dengan pencahayaan yang baik.
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PBLL EDITING By Rahma Maulida
Editorial Skill In English Publipreneur Based
Language Learning
(PBLL-Editing)
Made by:
Rahma Maulida (21310078)
1C CLASS
FOTOGRAFI MAJOR
POLITEKNIK NEGERI MEDIA KREATIF JAKARTA
(2021)
Practical Simulation Sheet
Practical Simulation Sheet
Publipreneur Based Language Learning
(PBLL-Editing)
The Learning Portfolios must be collected as follows:
1. The Original Group Work of PPT (Power Point)
2. Approval used of Editorial Symbols in Pair’s Group
3. Neatly typed of revised edition
4. Printed Edition of Class Work Dummy
5. Individual Voice of Recording in youtube channel for possibility of getting A Grade
LEARNING TREATMENT | |||||
No | PBLL-Approach | Meeting | Portfolios | Learning Output | Learning Outcome |
01 | Prewriting | 1-8 (UTS) | PPT Group, Mid-Test | Intend to be Self-Publishers | English for Special Purposes |
02 | Drafting | ||||
03 | Revising | ||||
04 | Editing | ||||
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Publishing | 9-16 (UAS | Book Dummy (PPT Group, Final-Test) Individual Voice in Video |
Digital Publishing Member of www.polakata.com by registering to www.polakata.com/addacc.pkt
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EDITOIRAL SKILL IN ENGLISH
PUBLIPRENEUR-BASED LANGUAGE LEARNING
(PBLL-Editing)
IUNSTRUCTIONS | |||||||
1. Use the red ink pen to mark your editorial findings 2. Write the name of manuscript’s writer within the box 3. Write your name as an editor within the editor’s box 4. Write the title of manuscript 5. Treat the draft as an accepted manuscript to the Editorial Department. 6. Edit the manuscript by using the editorial signs 7. Put the number of your editorial findings (mechanical, substantive, pictorial) within the box right-side 8. Write your verbal verification either suggestion, comment, or input for the manuscript’s improvement. 9. Give your editorial judgment about manuscript from the perspective of prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, publishing, marketing, delivering) 10. Good Luck.. be your best. | |||||||
Students’ Identity | Writer | Editor | |||||
Name | Muhammad Yudhistira Maypradana Indikaputra 21310035 | Rahma Maulida 21310011 | |||||
Study Program | Fotografi | Fotografi | |||||
Title of Manuscript | Article About Photography | ||||||
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· Types | 5 | other place (another place) must have (is must-have) period of time (period). there are objects that move (some objects move) period of time (period). | V | ||||
· Words | 8 | inspiring (an inspiring) long (a long) Blurring (blurring) Where’s (Where are) the (is the) photo (a photo) take (do take) Photographic ( A photographic) | V | ||||
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· Punctuations | 2 | Time (It-Time) auto focus (autofocus), | V | ||||
· Comma | 2 | and (,and) sunset, (sunset) | V | ||||
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Verbal Verification:
Overall this article is quite good and interesting to read, but there is some vocabulary that must be improved.
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Editorial Judgment
It will be more interesting if added photos to the article, even if it is not actually okay because overall this article is already good.
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